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Comment on My Five Favorite Places to Travel by A Forex Platform

A Forex Platform — Tue, 17 Mar 2009 00:05:46 +0000

right for my kid

Comment on Still A Glimpse of Hope for the Yankees by Nancy Mcmahon

Nancy Mcmahon — Mon, 16 Mar 2009 02:11:40 +0000

both disarming and impressing. BW

Comment on My Three Favorite Photo Galleries by Tanner Murray

Tanner Murray — Sun, 15 Mar 2009 06:12:35 +0000

I enjoyed reading your blog!!

Comment on Stillwater? More Like Stillwinning… by Kian Gilliam

Kian Gilliam — Sat, 14 Mar 2009 00:14:29 +0000

As the familiar saying: “Though analogy is often misleading, it is the least misleading thing we have.” (Samuel Butler)

Comment on Google Launches Flu Trends Site by canadaeh

canadaeh — Sun, 07 Dec 2008 03:43:41 +0000

Good entry with graph, picture and links.
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Comment on My Five Favorite Places to Travel by canadaeh

canadaeh — Sat, 22 Nov 2008 12:57:29 +0000

Good stuff. You used and ordered list and a bulleted list. Nice. Easy to read and follow. Consider using bold for the locations. It’s one more ‘chunking’ touch.

‘Laying on the beach’ [Lying on the beach]

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Comment on Signs, Signs Everywhere by canadaeh

canadaeh — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 03:07:25 +0000

Nice work with the specifics about the local towns. Well done.

Style:

every where [everywhere]

signs can only be placed on property [signs can be placed only on property]

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Comment on My Three Favorite Photo Galleries by canadaeh

canadaeh — Sun, 02 Nov 2008 22:31:19 +0000

Excellent.
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Comment on Still A Glimpse of Hope for the Yankees by canadaeh

canadaeh — Wed, 01 Oct 2008 02:14:54 +0000

Short and sweet. A bit more analysis (in playoffs every year since 1995; first time Jeter wouldn’t be playing in October; reasons why they didn’t win this year, etc.) might have made this better. Also, mention that the last three games were to be Yankees at Red Sox.

Good links, especially to the game vs. the Rangers.

AP style:
9 run deficit [nine-run]
exiting [exciting]
while the Red Sox lose [while the Red Sox would have to lose]

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Comment on Stillwater? More Like Stillwinning… by canadaeh

canadaeh — Sat, 27 Sep 2008 15:24:31 +0000

Odd first comment …
THANK YOU for including Stillwater’s population. The news about the lottery and the fact about the population make the story. Also, you added links and some formatting.

Watch your grammar and punctuation. Commas needed before “which” at least twice and after “Stillwater, New York”.

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